Thursday, July 10, 2008

Here's another short poem.

The Curse of Adulthood

Is when there's concrete drying
And you don't want to do anything to it,
Don't even want to touch it.
You'd have to think of something to write and
Your name isn't enough.

4 comments:

Nathan Shank said...

you could write my name ;)

Good, concise, metaphorical, apt.

The title's a bit much.

Unknown said...

cool, very nice.

karyn said...

i am relating to this poem, joanna. i enjoy the single image. unhampered.

maybe just "adulthood"?

Joanna Benskin said...

Thanks guys! Yeah, I'll change the title.