Sunday, July 27, 2008

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Sunday wakes up like
A crumpled dollar bill.
It yawns, checks the stocks,
And curls back the covers,
Falling asleep.

-nathan shank-

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I prefer the proverbial debit card, the wondrous piece of plastic with it's magnetic strip, it need not check the stocks but merely the balance and woosh on it's way from the wallet to the scanner to the wallet. :)
Yeah, I'm aware that made no sense but, hey, I like your poem.

karyn said...

strong image here, but it feels incomplete. can't place it.