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two of the roses’ stems snapped in the toss,and all of them still had thorns.but i don’t believe in ritual symbols anyway.
wonderful thought here!this may be stronger if you avoid first person and simply describe the scene. (though i realize this goes against everything i've ever written...)just a thought? would love to see any future drafts!
Isn't the catch the most important part of the toss?snarkyhehe
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wonderful thought here!
this may be stronger if you avoid first person and simply describe the scene. (though i realize this goes against everything i've ever written...)
just a thought? would love to see any future drafts!
Isn't the catch the most important part of the toss?
snarky
hehe
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